Couple shoot

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  1.   fuglsang Says:

    Get the listeners’ attention first Katy: The Brunson’s honeymoon ended quickly.

    Then the lead, and include a when.

    Finish the news before going to a re-telling of the shooting. That means an update on Laurette’s condition. After the facts, then the sources as a way of re-creating the incident.

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