Rewrite the Lead – In Class “Jane is a witch” story
Posted September 6, 2018 
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“Witches do not believe in the devil.” “Jane,” a witch and a goddess worshipper, is setting out to dispel myths about witchcraft.
“Jane” is your average woman. She goes to church and dresses like an accountant. You would never believe that “Jane” is a witch.
I might change “believe” to imagine.
Do you think it’s necessary to put Jane in quotation marks? I think I would just admit somehere early in the story that Jane isn’t the woman’s real name, and not worry about the quote marks.
… is setting out to dispel this (and other) myths about witchcraft. (That may be a bit clunky)