Observation
A girl with blonde hair just past her shoulders is walking by at a moderate pace. Her backpack is blue and black. She is wearing light colored blue jeans and a white shirt that hangs loosely on her frame. She is walking with another girl who is about a foot shorter than her and has no backpack. They are talking about soccer games that took place yesterday. I am looking towards Lewis Hall and the library. The green grass is being mowed and the noise it is making gets louder and softer as it goes back and forth across the lawn.
fuglsang Said:
on September 18, 2009 at 2:53 pm
What should I conclude from your details, Meghanne? Consider how you can select details to create for your reader a specific conclusion. I like the description of the lawn mower noise rising and falling.