my writing skills and faults.
As I write, I feel i have a decent flow and a particular style I like to maintain as the ink strokes the paper. Mostly I like to write about things that intrigue me and leave me asking questions about the subject matter and hopefully transfer that aspect to my readers.
With that said, I believe most of my problems in journalistic writing lie in being too wordy, using too many variations of sentence structure and going off on a tangent from time to time
Try writing without any forms of “be” verbs. This will make you much more concise.
Mary Zink said this on September 13, 2012 at 9:22 pm
Thank you :] i appreciate your constructive criticism.
Jescy said this on September 16, 2012 at 6:25 pm