The moon pies come in a clear wrapper individually wrapped from the box. They have a crackly sound. The wrapper has “Moon Pie,” pressed on the front in blue letters with white shadow effect, a yellow crescent moon with a smile on its face encomapces the words. Upon opening the wrapper a chocolaty flavor creeps out. I hold the hardened chocolate covered cylindrical disk in my hand velvety and cool to the touch. The sweet resembles a hockey puck. The teeth marks in the treat after biting in reveal the white marshmallow filling thin in the center and the next layer a sandy looking cake confection and the brown milk chocolate on the outside. The texture is slightly sandy then mushy and marshmallowy with the light feel of smooth milk chocolate. The flavor is graham cracker, mallow, and chocolate, a cold version of a smore with a more bland taste. There is an aftertaste leaving you with a remembrance of a stale cookie from your grandmother’s old fashioned cookie jar you used to steal from as a kid.
Good mix of objective and sensory description.
Good use of metaphor and memory.