Yesterday in Sioux City Iowa the east dakota highway patrol ordered hand held radar guns in order to do their jobs but studies say they could develop cancer from the exposure. Admm Smith says there will be procoussions taken and a ban made that affects 70 radar guns that will be withdrawn and will no longer be in service. State troopers will continue to use radar guns mounted on the side of their cruisers.
Way too much info in the first sentence/graf. Elise. Focus.
The East Dakota highway patrol ordered a ban on hand held radar guns yesterday.
Studies suggest…
Adam Smith said…
State troopers will continue to use radar guns mounted on the side of their cruisers.
One idea to a paragraph.