Reflection over Story #1

September 29, 2019

For paper #1, I think I put the most work into choosing the articles that I would use for my story. I read a lot of articles and had to pick three to use and choose the quotes I wanted. I wish I had spent more time considering what would be considered the important information to the readers. I think the information may be all mixed up.

The most difficult part was choosing information I wanted to emphasize and paragraph topics. The difficult part of this was the first sentence of the paragraph and introducing what I would be talking about.

My biggest problem was making things concise and awkward sentences. I would add “starts out saying” instead of using “says” talking about a quote. I tried to use short phrases to describe things after writing the draft and change it for the final.

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