A rivalry too toxic? Michigan, Michigan State grapple with the future
This article just goes into depth about the Michigan and Michigan State football rivalry and how a situation transpired about a week ago when they played each other. I like the lead I think it’s interesting because they make it clear that there is tension between the two teams and tease what that means for the teams in the future. Personally, this made me want to read because I’m interested about what this could mean for the rivalry of these two teams in the future.
I do believe that the article goes into a bit more detail than someone looking for a quick read would be interested in. The information given is very good and descriptive but I feel there is a more short and sweet way that the journalist could have put this together.
I like the incorporation of quotes though. Since we’ve been having to use quotes in class and that I’ve started to notice them more and have a bit more appreciation for them. I think it gives the article a juiciness to since you get first-hand accounts of what players, fans, alum, etc. have to say about the rivalry.
One thing I don’t really like or think is necessary is the writer talking about the political side of the rivalry. I think most sports fans and people interested in this rivalry don’t really care much to hear about the political side of it so personally I would leave that out and keep it football.
Overall, I think this is a well-written and descriptive article, I just think it could do without a lot of the details and written in a more concise manner in order to keep the reader interested and reading until the end.