“After the Loss of a Son, a Football Coach Confronts a Terrible Truth”
First of all, the header of this article is very helpful in my opinion. Personally, when I first read the title my initial thought was that there ended up being some sort of scandal that went on. The header cleared up my thoughts in stating that the son of this coach had a brain disease & that the father was forced to come to terms with this.
Meiko Locksley, son of Michael Locksley, was a natural born football player and it ended up costing him his life. Back in 2017, Meiko was shot and killed at the age of 25 after his parents believed him to be beginning to slip away from football and starting to run with the wrong crowd.
“I always thought, like, how do you go from a normal 21-year-old Division I football-playing person to, literally six months later, saying you hear people in the basement of an apartment where you lived on the eighth floor and you don’t have a basement?” Michael questioned. I think this article uses great quotes, which are directly from the source. I also believe the timeliness of the quotes that they use are good because they capture you at the right times and make you continue wanting to read.
I think the article does a good job at being informative and story-telling at the same time. A lot of articles have the tendency to sway one way or the other, which can make them seem repetitive at times. So, when reading this article it’s soothing to feel like you’re learning new information and being told a story at the same time.
Lastly, I like how this article uses outside sources and actually sites them along with giving visuals to the reader. This allows the reader to be able to feel comfortable consuming the information being given without feeling like the statistics are being pulled out of nowhere. Every article that is informative should be able to site where their information is coming from.