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23 08 2012Chocolate Star Bar Analysis.
Not to many students can say that there professor handed out chocolate ice cream bars at 10:30 in the morning. When my professor walked in with the boxes full of treats my morning instantly went from tired and groggy to wide awake and alert. Unwrapping the paper was the only thing that was between me and the delicious chocolate covered ice cream bar. The first bite was like sinking my teeth into a chocolatey heaven. The blistering cold vanilla ice cream in the middle was just the right temperature to turn my teeth into ice for just seconds. The ice cream bars were not only a delicious treat but also, almost like a savior to my sluggish forsaken morning.
OK, Paige. I like the groggy to wide awake. How could you show me that transformation? Chocolatey and blistering give me good clues, but delicious and like a savior need explanation. Consider objective details: what kind of ice cream? Colors? Shape? Sounds.
Homonyms.
Sorry about that, Christian. You and Paige have similar themes. I should know she’s a Packers fan, though.