Dec 03 2010

What I would change

Posted at 5:03 pm under Uncategorized

In my paper I would change the organization of it. I didn’t do a very good job of organizing the things I talked about. I would also put more examples in my paper do better explain some of the things I talked about. The last thing that I would probably change to my paper is making a better connection to my audience so the people would know who exactly what I was talking about and to who.

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