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Dec 03 2010

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Writing changing

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My writing has changed in many different ways. The writing I did this summer is something I did in like 10 to 15 minutes but with the papers I am doing now I spend hours on and I am actually thinking about what I’m writing and how I am writing it. Just by spending some time on a paper a think can make a huge difference. With my writings now I have better transitions and organization. I don’t repeat myself as much as I used to either.

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Dec 03 2010

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What I would change

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In my paper I would change the organization of it. I didn’t do a very good job of organizing the things I talked about. I would also put more examples in my paper do better explain some of the things I talked about. The last thing that I would probably change to my paper is making a better connection to my audience so the people would know who exactly what I was talking about and to who.

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