Gun Story

An armed robbery occurred last night at 450 Stanley Street where two men were seen entering a store at approximately 8:30 p.m. One man held a gun on store owner Barney Joseph Jr. while the other took $382.65 from the register. The third man was seen in a car parked outside the store at the curb with the motor running as he waited for his partners.

According to the desk sergeant, Joseph had a pistol stored under the counter but had decided not to reach under a grab it. Joseph had stated that the robbery was over in under a minute and felt that it would have been unwise to reach for his gun after his father had encountered a similar event that resulted in his death.

25 years ago Joseph’s father was killed during a similar situation at the same store. When asked about the story, Joseph stated “Yes, Dad resisted, I guess. Anyway, they found him shot to death, his own gun in his hand, and a bullet in the store’s ceiling. I’d rather part with my money than my life”.

One thought on “Gun Story

  1. The first sentence is OK as the lead, though “occurred” is a weak verb.

    One idea to a paragraph.

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