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Good leads, Nick. Good quotes throughout; they add good info. You also intro people well.
Emphasize the transitions. Make it clear when you’re moving from one story to another. The move from 2-3 has a nice pause, but you might add a textual transition as well.
From my perspective you might be going a bit too quickly, but at the same time there’s a nice energy to the broadcast. Well done.
November 29th, 2011 at 12:00 pm
Good leads, Nick. Good quotes throughout; they add good info. You also intro people well.
Emphasize the transitions. Make it clear when you’re moving from one story to another. The move from 2-3 has a nice pause, but you might add a textual transition as well.
From my perspective you might be going a bit too quickly, but at the same time there’s a nice energy to the broadcast. Well done.