Friday Article
This article didn’t surprise me. I know obesity is a huge problem, but most of the time you hear about child obesity and not so much in adults. The article is pretty well written with a good lead and good organization of facts and information.
http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/40015155/ns/health-diet_and_nutrition/
Who would have ever thought obesity was infectious?
Look at this story from the perspective of someone unfamiliar with scientific writing. Does it make sense? How does the writer make it understandable?