Sep 15 2010
Crash kills one injures three
A two car collision has left one dead and several others injured. Police say that Moyer Quick, age 65 of South Sioux, his wife Dorothy, and Maxine Steuerwald, 43 from Lawton, were traveling westbound on Hwy. 20 two miles east of Sioux City. Quick attepted to pass a vehicle driven by Randy Radin, 17 also of Sioux City, when his rear end struck Radin.
The impact sent both vehicles into the ditch. Quick’s vehicle rolled once. Radin is currently listed in “critical” condition with a fractured skull and internal injuries, while Mrs. Quick and Mrs. Steuerwald are listed in “good” and “fair” condition respectfully.
One Response to “Crash kills one injures three”
Overall a good shot, Kevin.
Since you know how many were involved, why not three instead of the vague several?
Also, if you’re lead is going to mention the injured in the lead, you should use the second graf to follow up and explain. Then re-cap how the accident happened.