Sep 26 2017
Senses
Slimy, but satisfying. The smell that makes you squeeze inside as the sour taste starts in your nose the moment you put it up to your mouth. As you chew the green kiwi, it sweetens your mouth as you chew but leaves your mouth with a dry and tangy taste that makes you want more.
As for the sweetness of the donut, the sugars hit your taste buds and the soft breading satisfies your hunger for a few minutes then leaves you wanting more!
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Slimy doesn’t sound appetizing. A synonym that is more inviting? Good mix of sensual details. In this case, my would be better than you.