Fire Fighter Bob Harwood broke his left leg falling 15 feet from a tree when saving a cat.
A calico cat belonging to two twin girls climes up a oak tree at 102 11th Ave. Harwood got the call and claimed a 50 foot oak tree to save the cat. 15 feet from the ground a dead limd he was on brakes and he broke his left leg while the cat landed on him. Harwood is at the St. Lukes Hospital recovering he says he doing “just fine.”
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